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托福写作解析:An important skill

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          Topic:An important skill
          What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
          参考范文:
          计算机技能是最重要的:
          (1)计算机是工作中必须的。不会计算机软件的话,无法进行工作和学习。
          (2)计算机已经成为人们互相交流的重要方面,如电子邮件等等。
          (3)计算机技能能够大量的节省时间。一个成功的人必须把精力抽出来放在最重要的事情上。
          Success has been an issue broadly discussed and defined by different approaches. Some say that being successful means being wealthy. Others associate success with popularity and power. A third approach would relate success with social and emotional well-being. So we come to the questions: “When can be someone considered successful?” and “What skills make success easier to achieve?"
          In order to answer the second question, we should have a point of view about what success is. I consider that someone is really successful when that person is able to handle and enjoy social relationships. A leader can be powerful and recognized, but if he is unable to enjoy his leadership and feels lonely because he cannot establish a deep friendship, can we really say such leader is successful? On the other hand, a wealthy person may have all the possessions money can buy, but again, what if he cannot manage a marriage or a friendship? This person is likely to feel lonely and unsatisfied.
          Developing social abilities may be a very helpful skill for a person to learn, in order to be successful in the social emotional side of his or her life. One ability to develop could be effective and assertive communication. Many misunderstandings and conflicts can be prevented if we express our ideas clearly and respectfully, and if we learn to ask for clarification when we feel threatened or offended by something someone told us. Another ability could be learning to handle teamwork. We need to learn to work with others at work, at home, at school, in our community. Getting into an agreement with our parents, children, coworkers and friends is a situation that can become hard to handle sometimes. Dealing with teamwork can be really helpful. Finally we could add the ability to deal with conflicts with others and conflicts with our own wishes or decisions. We will always find obstacles in our paths; it can be quite useful to know how to overcome them.
          In my opinion, I would define success as being able to enjoy what you have, what you do and who you deal with everyday. And to achieve success, you should have skills that help you handle relationships with your peers. We are social creatures; we need each other to succeed, and to enjoy our success.


成功是一个由不同方法广泛讨论和定义的问题。有人说成功意味着富有。其他人把成功与声望和权力联系在一起。第三种方法将成功与社会和情感幸福联系起来。所以我们来问一个问题:“什么时候一个人能被认为是成功的?“哪些技能使成功更容易实现?”


为了回答第二个问题,我们应该对什么是成功有一个观点。我认为当某人能够处理和享受社会关系时,他真的是成功的。一个领导者可以是强大的和被认可的,但是如果他不能享受他的领导,并且因为不能建立深厚的友谊而感到孤独,我们真的可以说他是成功的吗?另一方面,一个有钱人可能拥有金钱所能买到的所有财产,但同样的,如果他不能管理一段婚姻或一段友谊呢?这个人可能会感到孤独和不满足。


培养社交能力对于一个人来说是一项非常有用的技能,为了在他或她的生活中获得成功的社交情感方面。一种能力的发展可以是有效的和自信的沟通。如果我们清楚、尊重地表达我们的想法,并且当我们感到受到威胁或被别人告诉我们的事情冒犯时,我们学会要求澄清,许多误解和冲突就可以避免。另一种能力是学会团队合作。我们需要学会在工作、家庭、学校和社区中与他人合作。与父母、孩子、同事和朋友达成协议有时会变得难以处理。团队合作真的很有帮助。最后,我们可以增加处理与他人冲突以及与我们自己的意愿或决定冲突的能力。我们总是会在道路上发现障碍;知道如何克服障碍是非常有用的。


在我看来,我将成功定义为能够享受你拥有的、你做的以及你每天与谁打交道。为了取得成功,你应该具备帮助你处理与同龄人关系的技能。我们是社会性的生物;我们需要彼此成功,并享受我们的成功。


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