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托福写作解析:Children and sports

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发表于 2019-5-10 10:51:34 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
托福写作题目:
          Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
          参考分析:
          优点:对身体健康有好处;有助于培养与人和睦相处的能力;缺点:耽误学习,instant pleasure costs long-term benefits.
          花很长时间搞体育的优点
          (1)身体健康
          (2)促进团队精神
          (3)交很多朋友
          花很长时间搞体育的缺点:耽误学习
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          Children and sports
          Currently some young children spend a great amount of their time in practicing sports. Most parents feel quite happy because sports are good for their kids' development and team work spirit,however they are quite worried about some negative effects such as practicing sports occupies too much time, distracts their attentions on school work and loses certain interests on other activities. In my opinion, everything has its good side and bad side. The important thing is to handle it properly.
          Admittedly, practicing sports can help children's physical development, which makes them grow faster and stronger than before. As we know, during children's development periods, especially from 10 to 16 years old, sports are really helpful for children to develop. Sports can create a strong body that reduces the possibility of contracting some diseases easily. Definitely we believe that children benefit from sports.
          Another good thing is that sports teach us to learn how to corporate with other members in a team. Most sports are team work. If we want to play them well, we must master some skills to care about what our team members are thinking and how to adapt each other to achieve a common goal. Sports are not an individual activity, it needs corporation and mutual understanding. This is not easy to master. Of course, for parents they are delightful to see their children to get this skill from sports.


儿童与体育




目前,一些孩子花大量的时间练习体育运动。大多数家长都很开心,因为运动对孩子的发展和团队合作精神有好处,但他们很担心一些负面影响,例如练习运动占用了太多的时间,分散了他们对学校工作的注意力,对其他活动失去了一定的兴趣。在我看来,一切都有好的一面和坏的一面。重要的是要妥善处理。




诚然,体育锻炼可以帮助孩子们的身体发展,使他们比以前更快、更强壮。我们知道,在儿童的成长期,特别是10到16岁,体育运动对儿童的成长是非常有帮助的。运动可以创造一个强壮的身体,减少容易感染某些疾病的可能性。当然,我们相信孩子们从体育运动中受益。




另一件好事是体育教会我们如何与团队中的其他成员合作。大多数运动都是团队合作。如果我们想把他们发挥得很好,我们必须掌握一些技巧来关心我们的团队成员在想什么,以及如何相互适应以实现一个共同的目标。体育不是一项个人活动,它需要合作和相互理解。这不容易掌握。当然,对于父母来说,他们很高兴看到自己的孩子从体育运动中获得这种技能。


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